Betrayed

May 26, 2010
By Blaze BRONZE, Sagle, Idaho
Blaze BRONZE, Sagle, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"It may be that your sole purpose in life is to simply serve as a warning to others."


Betrayed and alone
Sat the necklace
At the home
Never to see another place

Its sea green shine
Beautiful no more
Has lost the battle against time
On this lonely shore
Betrayed and alone
Rested the sea green necklace
Yearning for a home
In its final resting place


The author's comments:
This was a fun poem that I created in my creative writing class. This is also my first poem.

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Natalie said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 9:51 am
Read it three times I liked it so much.

jack21 said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 12:42 am
Very concise, biting..... emotional.  I liked it as it got to me.

on Jun. 24 2010 at 5:22 pm
Cool, I liked it.




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