Double Sided

May 22, 2010
Looking out my window
Thinking what I see
A spark of star
Not quite too far
But just a memory

Looking out my window
A blackbird in a tree
He looks about
Without a doubt
He’s just a memory

Looking in my window
It’s he who looks for me
But soon he’ll leave
And out he’ll cleave
All but a memory

Looking out my window
A reflection that I see
A broken face
Thrown out of place
Into a memory





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Cookie said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 9:00 pm
this is really beautiful, ad i like how there are so many layers to understand, but there is still an overall feeling conveyed. And of course, 4 ways of looking at a memory. (it's spelled "rhythm", btw)
 
renee_527 said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 1:39 am
This is sooo pretty! I love how "just a memory" ended each stanza.
 
AwsomePossom said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 2:03 am
13 ways flashback.  4 ways to look out a window, and get a memory...or...relive it...or...yea.  Anyways, i like this one too, the rythem (SP?)  and the repetition of the stanzas is really cool.
 
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