Promblem

May 25, 2010
By swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face"
"no one ever drown in their own sweat"


Whipped around like a ragdoll
Can’t figure him out
I think he likes me
Then I doubt

His hair is a dark shade of brown
His eyes are warm and gentle
His hands are like dinner plates
His smile as brighter than the starts

When I talk to him
I can’t help but smile
The warm felling I get inside
Those crazy butterflies

Everyone tells me he’s not the one for me
But I think he is I really want to see
I love him but there is just one problem
He doesn’t love me back.


The author's comments:
This is a true story!!

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on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:51 pm
swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face"
"no one ever drown in their own sweat"

Thank you im horrible at grammar but im working on it, thank you again for your feedback.

on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:23 am
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
23 articles 10 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

umm a few grammar errors. oh well nobodys perfect. ahah wanting what you cant have. very relatable.  loved the opening stanza




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