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I Love You

May 25, 2010
By Sunset SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
Sunset SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the only fear in this world is fear itself"
"loved you once, love you still, always have, always will"


I don't know how to say this
I don't know where to start
I like you so much
your love is in my heart
I'm asking for a plea
Anything at all
Anything for you to hear my words
But catch me when i fall
Listen
Your eyes they make me weak
So breathless i cannot speak]
Your love is so sweet
It knocks me off my feet
I can't explain this feeling
Don't know what you do to me
Whenever i'm around you
I always feel poeticly and spiritualy free
You're always on my mind
And who says love has to be blind


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Sunset SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 1:15 pm
Sunset SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the only fear in this world is fear itself"
"loved you once, love you still, always have, always will"

this is not the whole thing and i don't remember whether it was because i ran out of time and didn't finish or the website didn't put in the whole poem. but thanx anywayz

Alice_C SILVER said...
on May. 31 2011 at 4:55 pm
Alice_C SILVER, Edgewood, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
We all have dark secrets, just no one knows them.- Me
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be."-unknown

This is pretty good, although there are places that you could improve, but is sweet