May 20, 2010
One action,
Can change your
Life in one
Fell swoop
Say good-bye,
To the life
You once knew
And hello
To a new one

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_Elsy_ said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 2:22 pm

I love this, short but very true with realistic emotion.5/5  And your just getting out of highschool? I'm still trying to deal with middle school, lucky.

btw-can you check out some of my stuff?

Freak.of.Nature replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 9:14 pm

Thanks! I like your work too, :D 

If you like emotional writing I'm the queen of it, feel free to take a look and let me know what you think.

_Elsy_ replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 9:52 pm
  haha cool
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