Feeling Lost

May 15, 2010
By Anonymous

I wake up feeling lost.
With-out you my worlds spinning,
aroundd.
I can't see anything.
It's making me feel dizy.
I can't help the tears that keep falling hard,
deep into my pillow,
and everytime I try to get up,
I fall right back down.
I feel so insecure,
out of control.
Maybe its cause your not here with me by my side.
But when I look at the mirror,
I don't recognize the figure shown.
I can't help the tears that keep falling hard,
deep into my pillow,
and everytime i try to get up,
I fall right back down.
I want to feel strong,
like the world is in my hand.
But some how I can't that possible,
when my heart is so...
empty.

The author's comments:
The poem just came to me. I'm really happy on how it turned out. I like it.

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on Mar. 10 2011 at 6:12 pm
UnwrittenGirl BRONZE, Little Falls, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
\"Find someone who can make you smile, and dont give up on them\"

Thank you! I checked out your poem already.

on Jun. 8 2010 at 8:48 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Its a really great poem! Your a great writer! Keep writing and you will go far! ( Could you check out some of my poems? I think that one you would particularly like would be The Rain.) (:


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