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Embracing my frozen soul with a lonely hand
I walk my barren wild wintery mind...
Why has summer gone?
Why did you give up, and raise the white flag of pale winter?
I guess I will miss you green healthy memories.

Cold crystals of doubt have grown with a gradual sharpness.
Slowly piercing my morels.
I am scared deep.
Then I saw your soft fair featured face.
To my chill, solemn,
Frozen soul




you are my Vocal Sunbeams.



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timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 1:35 pm
thanks a lot. I'll look at you stuff some time.
 
MidnightAngel7 said...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 9:06 pm
Wow, I totally pictured this as I read it! Amazing wording ! Totally love it!
 
beyondunderstanding said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 7:18 pm
I love it just amazing :)
 
DreamWriter15 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:18 pm
I love it, very beautiful and cold, I felt chills when I read it...though it is also sad...icicles hanging from violet petals...
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 11:14 am
Thank you so much. "icicles hanging from violet petals." that's really beautiful :)
 
DreamWriter15 replied...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 1:22 pm
Haha, you're quite welcome and thank you :)
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 1:13 pm
Hahaha. I might just use that.
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 3:17 pm
man youre really good captain. lets do our dance-vocally. 5 stars.
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 4:29 pm
We should dance. Heart the tempo. Love for words the moves.
 
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