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My heart is beating again and again….
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I am running farther and farther away not having a care in the world.
Just running as far as possible…
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I stop and wait wondering.
What was it?
Why do I feel this tightness so deep in my chest ?
My hands are starting to feel a bit clammy…
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Oh great now my neck and shoulders are giving me trouble
I can’t breath anymore, am I out of shape?
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The earth is moving around, around and around…
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Blackness…
Who would have thought that it would have happened to me?
Be careful this could happen to you in …
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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 3:44 am
i like how you turned a bad experience into a..well, it is still kind of bad isnt it?
 
Chibbie replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 10:19 pm
yes it is but thanks for the unfinished comment :)
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 11:18 pm
it was finished, but the actual finishment was kind of implied....captain.
 
Chibbie replied...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 8:51 pm
i knew what you meant just wanted to bother you
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 9:51 pm
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camille_1441 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 4:21 am
I'm sorry for your loss, the meaning behind this peice is really moving and beautiful
 
Chibbie replied...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 10:20 pm

thank  you very much i am very thankfull

 

 
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