it only take 60 seconds

May 12, 2010
By Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)


My heart is beating again and again….
10
I am running farther and farther away not having a care in the world.
Just running as far as possible…
20
I stop and wait wondering.
What was it?
Why do I feel this tightness so deep in my chest ?
My hands are starting to feel a bit clammy…
30
Oh great now my neck and shoulders are giving me trouble
I can’t breath anymore, am I out of shape?
40
The earth is moving around, around and around…
50
Blackness…
Who would have thought that it would have happened to me?
Be careful this could happen to you in …
60 seconds

The End


The author's comments:
well my father died of a heart attack and i wanted to know how it felt in my point of veiw and it was part of a porject. Did you know in the US every 60 seconds someone dies of a heart attack?

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on Aug. 14 2010 at 9:51 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

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on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:51 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

i knew what you meant just wanted to bother you

on Aug. 13 2010 at 11:18 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

it was finished, but the actual finishment was kind of implied....captain.

on Aug. 13 2010 at 10:20 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

thank  you very much i am very thankfull

 


on Aug. 13 2010 at 10:19 pm
Chibbie1 PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
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Reach for the the moon for if you fail you land amongst the stars :)

yes it is but thanks for the unfinished comment :)

on Jun. 20 2010 at 3:44 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

i like how you turned a bad experience into a..well, it is still kind of bad isnt it?

on Jun. 16 2010 at 4:21 am
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
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I'm sorry for your loss, the meaning behind this peice is really moving and beautiful


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