I Love You

May 7, 2010
By BrittNicole BRONZE, Tangier, Indiana
BrittNicole BRONZE, Tangier, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let no man pull you low enough to hate him.

I'm sorry
for the way i've treated you
you gave me life
my first breath
I turned around
and thought you
a bad person
a horrible parent
all i wanted to do you right
treat you like u deserve
you were my mother and
i treated u like nothing
so this is my apology
I love you and i'm sorry

The author's comments:
this is to my mom. i treat her like crap and she doesn't deserve it. i love you mom.

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eglantine GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2010 at 11:01 pm
eglantine GOLD, Huntsville, Alabama
18 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
a robe. you know... a backwards snuggie.

i love this poem. i think this is something that a lot of people struggle with; i know i do. you obviously know your audience which is the first step to becoming a good writer.but more than that, this piece is genuinely heartfelt, which makes it special. keep up the good work!

p.s. please take a look at some of my work and comment?? thanks


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