I once was

May 10, 2010
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I once was a young girl, with an open mind,
Everything I did, was ever so kind.
I once was a mismatched girl, dressed by my mom,
Exploded on me, was a colorful bomb.
I once was a playful girl, with ideas of the sky,
I could swing and climb, hours passing by.
I once was a fearless girl, wanting to do everything,
Never needing to cover up, under someone’s wing.
I was once a different girl, so far from who I am today,
Following my heart, every step of the way!





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BleedingRose said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 2:26 pm

:D

But I have a question . . . why aren't there a bazillion comments on this?  *knocking on peoples' heads*  Wake up, world!  We've got poetry to read!

:D

-Rose

 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 13, 2010 at 10:10 am
haha thankyou so much that's so nice!!!
 
PrincessPineapple said...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 9:54 pm
awww, this is cute :)
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 6:32 am
Thankyou!:)
 
WritingLoverForever said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 6:02 pm
Wow, this is incredible. I can relate to it in every way. Your work is amazing.
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 7:22 am
Wow! thankyou so much it means a lot!!
 
Rulesofmyown said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 7:56 am
i just have one word to say....AMAZING!!:)
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 5:53 pm
wow thankyou so much!! i think you would also like 'words unspoken' and 'stay for tomorrow' if you want to check those out :)
 
Demon_of_Truth said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 7:05 pm
This was quite good and i liked it.
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 8:11 pm
thanks!!! :)
 
Spectacles said...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 2:39 pm

You just can't say enough in a comment box, this is really quite good though. =)

 

 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 2:09 pm
thankyou so much!!!
 
betwixt_11 said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 1:10 pm
I really liked this:) And thanks so much for your comment!
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 2:09 pm
ur welcome and thankyou for yours!! :)
 
SarahJumps said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 2:23 pm
I like this very much. :) It reminded me of childhood and you represented the care-free thoughts of a child very, very well. good job
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 3:18 pm
thankyou so much!!
 
Lonleydandy said...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 9:10 am
I liked it.
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 10:40 am
thanks what did u like about it?
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 8:06 am
I'm not really sure...it just appealed to me.....[I don't know how though!]
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 5:24 pm
lol :) thankyou so much!
 
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