Waiting for the sun

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Snow falls on my face
like tears
I wonder where you
are,
why aren’t you here with me
is there a reason
that says ‘can’t be’
I want to see you again
to feel your embrace
and then feel loved.
It might not be true,
but I’d stay true to you
if you’d be true to me
I ask myself where
you could be,
my friends why I even care
I say that you’re the
reason I stare
wistfully outside.
Snow falls like rain
unheard in my heart
the snowy fields
have no faith, but
wait for the sun to
come.
I look outside and feel
that seasons are more
real and the sunshine will come.
There’s slight chance
that you love me
but I wish with all my soul
maybe then I’ll see
the sun again
and feel safe in the warmth.
Forever winter, a
state my heart is
in, asking for your
love wouldn’t do me
in.
At least sunshine would melt away the snow
and flowers would grow
because you gave love a chance.





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condor said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:24 pm
ITS HARD TO SAY WHICH LINES WERE MY FAVORITE CUZ....I LOVED ALL OF THEM!!! THIS POEM IS REALLY NICE AND ROCKING I LOVED IT...IT SORT OF DESCRIBES HOW I FELT ABOUT THIS GUY :] GREAT JOB [HIGH-FIVE]
 
vegan416 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 11:57 am
this is so magical. the last 3 lines are my favorite
 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:25 pm
U SAID IT ;]
 
theMysteryPoet said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 7:59 pm
I really liked this. It flows nicely and has great rythm. Well written
 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:24 pm
I TOTALLY AND MOST DEFINITELY....AGREE!!!!! LOL
 
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