Waiting for the sun

May 10, 2010
By Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna


Snow falls on my face
like tears
I wonder where you
are,
why aren’t you here with me
is there a reason
that says ‘can’t be’
I want to see you again
to feel your embrace
and then feel loved.
It might not be true,
but I’d stay true to you
if you’d be true to me
I ask myself where
you could be,
my friends why I even care
I say that you’re the
reason I stare
wistfully outside.
Snow falls like rain
unheard in my heart
the snowy fields
have no faith, but
wait for the sun to
come.
I look outside and feel
that seasons are more
real and the sunshine will come.
There’s slight chance
that you love me
but I wish with all my soul
maybe then I’ll see
the sun again
and feel safe in the warmth.
Forever winter, a
state my heart is
in, asking for your
love wouldn’t do me
in.
At least sunshine would melt away the snow
and flowers would grow
because you gave love a chance.



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on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:25 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

U SAID IT ;]

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:24 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

I TOTALLY AND MOST DEFINITELY....AGREE!!!!! LOL

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:24 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

ITS HARD TO SAY WHICH LINES WERE MY FAVORITE CUZ....I LOVED ALL OF THEM!!! THIS POEM IS REALLY NICE AND ROCKING I LOVED IT...IT SORT OF DESCRIBES HOW I FELT ABOUT THIS GUY :] GREAT JOB [HIGH-FIVE]

on Aug. 20 2010 at 11:57 am
OneProzacADay PLATINUM, State College, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You are the universe expressing itself as human for a little while." -Eckhart Tolle

this is so magical. the last 3 lines are my favorite

on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:59 pm
luckypachyderm SILVER, Medford, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and it is better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring- Marlyn Monroe

I really liked this. It flows nicely and has great rythm. Well written


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