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I hate this

April 27, 2010
By Forgotten BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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Forgotten BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Loneliness adds beauty to life. It puts a special burn on sunsets and makes night air smell better.-Henry Rollins, For who can bear to feel himself forgotten?-W. H. Auden, Forgotten is forgiven- F. Scott Fitzgerald

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I hate this.
Being alone.
Being ignored.
Being forgotten.

I’m through.
I’m done.
I give up.

They’re all liars.
The ones who say they’ll help.
The ones who say they’ll listen.
The ones who say they care.

Damn the liars!
Damn the trials!
Damn it all to pieces!

© Andrea E., Phoenix, AZ

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bound4life4ever PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 3:09 pm
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
32 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

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omg! pure genius! the simplicity of it is amazing! stioong ending nd OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! thats xactly wat i needed  cuz of my stupid damn boyfriend breaking up w me! ahhhh1 i love this even more than i did 2 sec ago
Forgotten BRONZE said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 10:16 pm
Forgotten BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Loneliness adds beauty to life. It puts a special burn on sunsets and makes night air smell better.-Henry Rollins, For who can bear to feel himself forgotten?-W. H. Auden, Forgotten is forgiven- F. Scott Fitzgerald

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thanks, GangstaEyes :)
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 3:50 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

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I completely understand where you're coming from with this poem - Some of my stuff is like this - just what comes out when I'm venting. I like it. :)
Forgotten BRONZE said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 5:28 pm
Forgotten BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Loneliness adds beauty to life. It puts a special burn on sunsets and makes night air smell better.-Henry Rollins, For who can bear to feel himself forgotten?-W. H. Auden, Forgotten is forgiven- F. Scott Fitzgerald

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i see... well to be honest, i was just venting when i wrote this... but i admit, i don't like this poem much either after reading it. but thanks for commenting anyway.
GoodmorningSweetheart BRONZE said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 12:42 pm
GoodmorningSweetheart BRONZE, Bloomington, Indiana
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From Thomas the Rhymer:
"O see ye not that narrow road,
So thick beset with thorns and briers?
That is the path of righteousness,
Tho after it but few enquires."

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Of your three poems this is my least favorite. It simply reflects typical thoughts that fail to give me a new view on life. Too simple. Too typical.