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May 25, 2010
By bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant


I walk in and everyone starts to stop and stare,
I start to feel awkward and just run to my chair,
I stay quiet like I've done something wrong,
and bury my head cos I've got to be strong,

I look up from my work, it's all started again,
The giggles and whispers, the scratch of a pen,
They're writing silly notes, passing them around,
but even right now i am not making a sound,

Break time comes, i just want to run away,
I go into the toilets, i just hope and i pray,
I look into the mirror and look right at my face,
covered in sweat and tears, oh what a disgrace,

What am i doing crying and hiding like this,
I feel like going in the room and giving some fist,
but I'm not that kind of person, I'm just too shy,
I'm a kind person who wouldn't even hurt a fly,

I need to go home now and get a little rest,
I'll get prepared for tomorrow and try my best,
not to let any of them bother me in any way,
As tomorrow is the start of another new day,

At home i put on some music and have a cry,
At last i am free and at home, I give a sigh,
Then i jump into bed and i turn off the light,
but i wake up because i get such a fright,

I have had a nightmare, this is all i need now,
I want it all to go away, I ask why and how,
Is this all my fault for being scared and quiet,
Is it my fault that I'm thin and their on a diet,

but i am just me i can't be nobody else, ever,
cos i don't want to feel like this, now or never!
This was wrote when i was being bullied really bad and i hope it doesn't start again! I would appreciate some feedback if you have time. Thanks :)


The author's comments:
i been buled my whole life

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on Mar. 14 2011 at 1:24 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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 I was persuing these poems and i read yours aain. i satill like. if you're not minding-what did i write that you are so amazed by? i reread the comments so now im just curious.

on Jul. 4 2010 at 12:55 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

omg i wish i can be an amezing wtiter like you

on Jul. 3 2010 at 4:45 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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merci very alot much captain!!!

on Jul. 3 2010 at 2:16 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

thankz your an amezzing writer keep it up.

on Jun. 9 2010 at 8:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

ever-that captain.

on Jun. 9 2010 at 11:05 am
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

thank you for the comment

on Jun. 9 2010 at 11:05 am
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

thank you for the comment

on Jun. 9 2010 at 11:05 am
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

thank you for the comment hun

on Jun. 3 2010 at 6:18 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

dont listen to what anyone else says...your an amazing writer and they dont know what there talking about...your poem is really good because you could feel the emotion behind it. great job.

on Jun. 1 2010 at 8:11 pm
Lollipop2012 SILVER, Las Veags, Nevada
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THIs was really good. I mean its sad that you go through that, but just remember its not worth crying or being upset over. Let them talk their trash, things will get better

on Jun. 1 2010 at 6:44 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

this is very nice captain. i love the ryming schemism and the emotionality. they can go jump, 5 stars captain.


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