May 6, 2010
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Desperately she searches for remains of their life together
But finds nothing other than shattered hopes he left behind
As she cries out to an owl howling in the night
She falls to her knees
And begs to him "please,
Lift these weights of heartbreak
Allow me to take flight
I have nothing left
For this thing in my chest
Beats no more
With this blade put my suffering to rest
Let me soar

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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 7:03 pm
hmm, suicide. thats nice. thisis very emotional captain and i really like it. 5 stars. p.S.-dont say my name in the dark.
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