Limbo

May 6, 2010
By JorJor BRONZE, Boyne City, Michigan
JorJor BRONZE, Boyne City, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the best days of our lives."


I’m on the outs with my friends,
Not talking to them anymore.
They don’t seem to care,
Too caught up in themselves.
Having the times of their lives,
Without me.

I’m on the outs with her,
Not spending much time together.
We make plans for some day,
But she’s too busy.
With her friends laughing,
Without me.

I’m on the outs with my family,
Can’t stand being around them.
Not wanting to be home when they’re around,
Off in their own business.
They go on vacation,
Without me.


I’m on the outs with myself,
Not liking the way I treat people.
Only caring for myself,
Not anyone else’s comments about anything.
Bottling up all these emotions
Without anyone.


The author's comments:
I wrote this when my best friend and me stopped hanging out and me and my girlfriend were officially over. All of this happened within a few days. And this poem helped me get over all of those feelings.

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