Silence

May 7, 2010
By feartheuntypical GOLD, Nelson, Other
feartheuntypical GOLD, Nelson, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A writer is somebody for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people.
- Thomas Mann


Lying in the leaves
Twisted and broken
His hair soaked red
Once perfect and golden

A peaceful look
On his angel doll face
Green eyes shut tight
As if in a faze

Red sparkling wildly
In the hot burnt sun
The tree molting layers
Blood mixed with pollen

His time to go
No one there to bargain
No eyes had witnessed
The sight of him fall down

Lack of audio attended
Just a muffled land
He would no longer
Make a sound


The author's comments:
A gum tree stood and its deep blood red leaves were scattering themselves around it. This poem is what I thought up about it.

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on Jun. 13 2011 at 10:43 pm
Mackayla SILVER, Ft Collins, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Finish each day and be done with it. You have done what you could. Learn from it; tomorrow is a new day. -Ralph Waldo Emerson

REALLY enjoyed reading this. great job

on Aug. 13 2010 at 5:28 pm
woah my comment sounded dodgy. sorry:). i just LOVE fine work. keep it up. u rock!

on Aug. 11 2010 at 10:15 pm
feartheuntypical GOLD, Nelson, Other
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
A writer is somebody for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people.
- Thomas Mann

ummm, thankyou?

on Jun. 25 2010 at 1:20 am
giving me book orgasms its so well written! keep up the 'sane work my friendy pie, :D, oh btw u smell,,,, of old books (the best smell)! mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 


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