Reach In

May 4, 2010
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When you feel weak and tired,
still holding onto the wrong desires.
When crowds of people are blocking your view
and you can’t break through the fog that’s grabbing you.
When you pray and feel nothing at all,
just stop holding on and let yourself fall.
O Please reach in,
I’m fed up with what I’ve been.
Just pull me aside
and hold on to me tight.
Just show me you’re here;
give me some sense of fear.
I want to know this love so true;
God make me a part of you.

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JoetheBlanc said...
May 24, 2010 at 9:34 pm
very amazing. 4 stars, because the syllabic count's a bit awry. only a bit though, and it fits. still, sorta hard to read after the halfway pt. 4 stars.
aimababesz said...
May 24, 2010 at 7:33 pm
I think this poem is AWESOME i really feel like i can relate
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