Give Me A Love Story

May 19, 2010
By TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 946 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’


Give me a love story
A real story
One with no happy ending
One where, at the end of the movie, the girl doesn't always get the guy

I want a love story
Where it doesn't just show f





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g in love
But fighting for love

I want a love story
One where the main star realizes
True love isn't about getting what you want
But letting the one you love
To have what they want
Even when it's not you

I want a love story





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One where, if you b r e a k u
It isn't always because your bf/gf is evil
One where you choose friendship over ruining what you have for "love"
One where it's a shy love
Not a one-night-stand "love"

Give me a love story
Not a fairy tale
Give me Romeo and Juliet
Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet
Not Taylor Swift's rendition

I don't want love at first sight
I want SCREAMING AND FIGHTING
Sarcastic battles and hating each other
Till you finally realize
How much you truly love each other

I don't want Cinderella
Or Snow White
Or Belle
Or Sleeping Beauty

I want Hester and Tom



Phil and Keely
Jack and Sue


Joe and Stella
Morgan and Garcia


Lizzie and Gordo
Louis and Tawny

And, oh, yes, Tony and Ziva

Give me a real love

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With u
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With ins -> and outs <-

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With lies so you won't discover
The truth hidden deep down

Give me REAL
Or give me NOTHING...



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TheJust ELITE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:41 pm
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 946 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Excuse me for the way this poem was posted...it was supposed to be completely different and was completely messed up, so sorry!

TheJust ELITE said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 8:56 am
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 946 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Haha, thank you!! :)

shaPOO888 said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 8:46 am
omagosh!!! this poems was SOOOO good...and I absolutely LOVE the "tony and ziva" bit.

TheJust ELITE said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 10:28 am
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 946 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

P.S thank you for favoriting it also! :) :)

TheJust ELITE said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 9:10 am
TheJust ELITE, Ellenton, Florida
254 articles 202 photos 946 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I feel that a hero is somebody who will stand up for their values and what they believe in and that can take any form. People that have values and have thought them through rather than those who just do what they’re told."-Skandar Keynes

"When it’

Well, thank you in return and you're welcome!!

on Jun. 9 2010 at 6:35 am
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
11 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Movement" -TWLOHA
"Love is our weapon." -Christofer Drew
"I'ma get me a High School Diploma, even if I gotta steal one!" -ThisKidInMyMathClassLol

Phil and Keely

Lizzie and Gordo

Louis and Tawny

Lol, we watched the same shows back in the day ;D

I'm not going to lie, this is amazing, and I understand your thought. I've been in real love. It's not easy, it's hard work, but it's real. and that is truly what makes it beautiful. It's lasting. I love this poem, and I'm going to favourite it.

Five stars.

[Thankyou so much for commenting on my stuff, I always return the favour, and I rate.]



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