Only Tears for this Land

April 27, 2010
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My breath studded with ice
a seemingly endless expanse of white
and a blue glow surrounding me
sheer white glass stands around
no sound escapes the lips of this world
and something bigger is felt
the sea is barley seen in the distance, but it begins to creep, slowly, carefully towards the middle
the walls of glass begin to sink
the sound of cracking ice begins
and the chill falls further and further away
white dirties to brown
and suddenly
there is only tears for this land

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jonas_chick899 said...
May 23, 2010 at 9:32 am
loved it!! ur word choice is very admirable:DD
Thrush replied...
May 29, 2010 at 8:33 pm
Thanks! Is the message clear enough?
shes_a_tee_ex_babeh_899 replied...
May 29, 2010 at 9:43 pm
umm i dont think u should ask me that. lol i can be slow, but it could be clearer to somebody else?? ...ok i just reread everything. i think im close to wat ur getting at (again, i can be slow lol) :]
Thrush replied...
May 30, 2010 at 11:00 am
ok thanks a lot!
AnneOnnimous said...
May 17, 2010 at 7:39 pm
this is really good!!!
Thrush replied...
May 18, 2010 at 3:00 pm
Thanks Anne, I just was thinking and it came out. Thanks :) <3
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