Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Only Tears for this Land

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
My breath studded with ice
a seemingly endless expanse of white
and a blue glow surrounding me
sheer white glass stands around
no sound escapes the lips of this world
and something bigger is felt
the sea is barley seen in the distance, but it begins to creep, slowly, carefully towards the middle
the walls of glass begin to sink
the sound of cracking ice begins
and the chill falls further and further away
white dirties to brown
and suddenly
there is only tears for this land




Join the Discussion


This article has 6 comments. Post your own!

jonas_chick899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 23, 2010 at 9:32 am:
loved it!! ur word choice is very admirable:DD
 
Thrush replied...
May 29, 2010 at 8:33 pm :
Thanks! Is the message clear enough?
 
shes_a_tee_ex_babeh_899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 29, 2010 at 9:43 pm :
umm i dont think u should ask me that. lol i can be slow, but it could be clearer to somebody else?? ...ok i just reread everything. i think im close to wat ur getting at (again, i can be slow lol) :]
 
Thrush replied...
May 30, 2010 at 11:00 am :
ok thanks a lot!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
AnneOnnimous said...
May 17, 2010 at 7:39 pm:
this is really good!!!
 
Thrush replied...
May 18, 2010 at 3:00 pm :
Thanks Anne, I just was thinking and it came out. Thanks :) <3
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback