Only Tears for this Land

April 27, 2010
By Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life to it's fullest extent, it's the only life you've got" "Enjoy yourself, be yourself, love yourself"


My breath studded with ice
a seemingly endless expanse of white
and a blue glow surrounding me
sheer white glass stands around
no sound escapes the lips of this world
and something bigger is felt
the sea is barley seen in the distance, but it begins to creep, slowly, carefully towards the middle
the walls of glass begin to sink
the sound of cracking ice begins
and the chill falls further and further away
white dirties to brown
and suddenly
there is only tears for this land


The author's comments:
Warmth is a a gift, but so is the cold

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Thrush BRONZE said...
on May. 30 2010 at 11:00 am
Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life to it's fullest extent, it's the only life you've got" "Enjoy yourself, be yourself, love yourself"

ok thanks a lot!

on May. 29 2010 at 9:43 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

umm i dont think u should ask me that. lol i can be slow, but it could be clearer to somebody else?? ...ok i just reread everything. i think im close to wat ur getting at (again, i can be slow lol) :]

Thrush BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2010 at 8:33 pm
Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
4 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life to it's fullest extent, it's the only life you've got" "Enjoy yourself, be yourself, love yourself"

Thanks! Is the message clear enough?

on May. 23 2010 at 9:32 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

loved it!! ur word choice is very admirable:DD

Thrush BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2010 at 3:00 pm
Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Live life to it's fullest extent, it's the only life you've got" "Enjoy yourself, be yourself, love yourself"

Thanks Anne, I just was thinking and it came out. Thanks :) <3

on May. 17 2010 at 7:39 pm
AnneOnnimous BRONZE, Peterborough Ontario, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Saying 'I notice you're a nerd' is like saying, 'Hey, I notice that you'd rather be intelligent than be stupid, that you'd rather be thoughtful than be vapid, that you believe that there are things that matter more than the arrest record of Lindsay Lohan. Why is that?' In fact, it seems to me that most contemporary insults are pretty lame. Even 'lame' is kind of lame. Saying 'You're lame' is like saying 'You walk with a limp.' Yeah, whatever, so does 50 Cent, and he's done all right for himself."
— John Green

this is really good!!!


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