She Won't Be Broken MAG

April 27, 2010
By princessness_16 SILVER, Dundee, New York
princessness_16 SILVER, Dundee, New York
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She shines straight through Jesus,
onto the pages of my dusty bible.
Her Sunday dress is dirty;
But I know she won't be broken,
because she wears
the most deceitless smile I've seen all day.



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lkk4209 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:50 pm
lkk4209 BRONZE, Somewhere, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"April Fool's Day is for amateurs. You never need an excuse to mess with people's heads."

"I may be lying in the gutter, but I'm staring up at the stars, honey."

I really like this poem! The woman being described is really vivid!

on Feb. 25 2011 at 1:39 pm
babygirl195 BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I'm prettiful

the  poem is good


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