Come Back

April 26, 2010
By Key14 GOLD, Douglasville, Georgia
Key14 GOLD, Douglasville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
If Love is a Lie then is Hate the Truth



-Crosskey


Listen Hate has a rythme
Yet it's rythme is out of date
Cause you hear
The ones you hold dear
Are sick of it
They are tired of the lies
That leave you paralyzed
In the fear
That the searing pain will take you away
Your not the same kid that wanted the new toy
Now the new boy just wants to be alone
Though he feels like dying
You can tell by how he wont stop crying
Stop Lieing
I know your in there
We do care and miss you
We plead you to come back
In the end we need you
Please come back
We love you


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on Jun. 29 2010 at 5:36 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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poetry is a diary written out loud

i wish someone would have told me this when i was lost

on May. 19 2010 at 10:40 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

this poem is ahmazing! it reminds me a lot of my brother.....

comment and rate mine? thankss ! (-


on May. 17 2010 at 4:38 pm
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
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"And I'll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I've found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I've lost everything."-mayday parade

OMG I love this piece. Its like everything I ever wanted him to feel.. although you did misspell a few words :P

on May. 16 2010 at 11:53 am
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

this is sooo true, everybody feels hate it takes strong people to overcome it... good job... check out my work


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