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Hatred
April 26, 2010
The Snake came up
And bit me
I did not know why
But it did
Its teeth in me
Wouldn't stop attacking
And the venom
Ran through my blood
The venom ignited fire
That boiled rage
And the rage did nothing
I grew helpless
Until Hatred took over
It killed my heart
It killed my soul
It killed the snake
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This article has 17 comments.
XxBVBGRLxX said...
on May. 19 2010 at 10:55 pm
This is a great poem. I love the ending - It killed my heart. It killed my soul. It killed the snake. Beautiful ending!!
margierose GOLD said...
on May. 19 2010 at 3:07 pm
Wow that's amazing!!! Keep writing you have real talent. Would you mind reading mine?
dianaforfree said...
on May. 19 2010 at 10:55 am
goodness! this is pure wonder. i love i love love. i love the words and the way you use them. i love the image, so very deep. wondrous.
bkcrider92 GOLD said...
on May. 19 2010 at 10:42 am
I really like this! If you can please check out my poem Memories and let me no wat you think and rate it =)
Sweatheart SILVER said...
on May. 18 2010 at 7:52 pm
i really enjoyed this poem i liked how you showed that hatred is such a strong emotion 5 star
paranormaluv said...
on May. 18 2010 at 4:23 pm
Haha imagine if the snake and the speaker represented two people, like person A and person B. Then it would be like, person A did something bad to person B and wouldn't stop, so person B started to develop that rage and hate.
I love this poem, it could be interpreted so many different ways!
Safeleo said...
on May. 18 2010 at 1:49 am
I like snakes! But other than that, really good poem.
brianababy BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 7:33 am
I like this alot, it really shows your emotion toward the snake.
Patience97 PLATINUM said...
on May. 16 2010 at 8:34 pm
I love this. It shows how the snake attacked aimlessley. To kill, rather to kill one. It wasn't aiming for anyone in particular, just someone... great poem. Truthful.
mariahLynn SILVER said...
on May. 16 2010 at 1:34 pm
this is really good. you should cheack out some of my work
hollyhottell DIAMOND said...
on May. 16 2010 at 11:49 am
hey this is good... normally i only like poetry that rymes in a certain way... but i liked this poem. good job... check out my work
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Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)
wonderfully crafted.... marvelous.... kinda creepy.... my favorite part is the ending....
pS. will u please check out my work? id love some feedback
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