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Let Me Love Him

April 25, 2010
By PoeticTwirler PLATINUM, Wantagh, New York
PoeticTwirler PLATINUM, Wantagh, New York
24 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If I has to chose between loving you and breathing , I would use my last breath to say I love you...."


Don’t know what love is?

You don’t know what love is

Don’t tell me you do

Because you don’t



You don’t know that feeling you get

When the person that makes you feel amazing holds you

That causes chills to go up your back

Never wanting them to let go of you



You don’t know how it feels to have their eyes

Looking into yours

Seeing their eyes sparkle when they look at you

And all you can do is smile



You don’t know the feeling you get when they hold your hand

How you don’t want them to let go

Because you know when they hold your hand

That you are safe from the rest of the world



You don’t know the feeling that when they kiss you

You feel like you are going to melt into a puddle

Feel like there is no one there

But just you and that person







You don’t know the feeling of when they say I love you

How your heart races and then it stops

How amazingly happy you feel inside

Or how much you want to say I love you back to them



You don’t know this feeling

I doubt that you have

So when I say I have that feeling

Don’t critize me



Don’t say

I know what you feel

Don’t say good for you

Just let me have that feeling of love



Let me feel

All of those things

Don’t stop me

Let me tell him I love you


The author's comments:
this would be my depiction of when somebody says " they know how your love feels "

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on May. 15 2010 at 6:25 pm
PoeticTwirler PLATINUM, Wantagh, New York
24 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If I has to chose between loving you and breathing , I would use my last breath to say I love you...."

Again I have to say thank you, hope you like some of my other stuff!

on May. 15 2010 at 5:26 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

well you have beautiful writing skills :) definitely keep it up!

on May. 15 2010 at 5:22 pm
PoeticTwirler PLATINUM, Wantagh, New York
24 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If I has to chose between loving you and breathing , I would use my last breath to say I love you...."

I justed wanted to say thank you for your comment because I appricate that you read like my poetry. I just wanted to write something h=that everyone can relate to because to me this is something everyone goes through in life

on May. 15 2010 at 3:32 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

that was really pretty and totally realistic about people not approving of your choices about who you can love or something similar...great job :)