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I’m like a cool glass of tea
On a summer night
Delicious and refilling

I’m like a breeze of wind against your cheek
Sculpting your bone structure
Massaging away all problems

I’m like the stars
Shaped into a drinking gourd
Guiding runaways through darkened nights to freedom

I’m like love
Never seen but lives within the depths of souls
That sweetly plays a tune toward its lover





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ElijahNoble said...
May 13, 2010 at 2:07 pm
very nice, good metaphors. comment on mine sometime?
 
Shahed said...
May 13, 2010 at 12:51 pm

I love it!!! You're so talented!            Although I think you should add about 2 more " Im like..." before the last one, but seriouslly God bless!

Check out my work! ;)

 
Tiffanie_ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 10:51 pm

aww! This is a VERY good poem!! Keep it going! 

 

p.s you should comment some of my poetry? haha

 
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