When You're Here

April 21, 2010
By vivi28cherries SILVER, Ridgefield Park, New Jersey
vivi28cherries SILVER, Ridgefield Park, New Jersey
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When I needed you most,
you weren't around.
You missed fifth grade,
alond with my 11th birthday.
You aren't there when I'm sick,
or when I'm sad.
You come and go,
never staying long.
But when you're here,
all my troubles are gone.


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on May. 13 2010 at 3:01 pm
vivi28cherries SILVER, Ridgefield Park, New Jersey
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Thanks so much.

on May. 13 2010 at 3:00 pm
vivi28cherries SILVER, Ridgefield Park, New Jersey
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Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.

on May. 13 2010 at 2:59 pm
vivi28cherries SILVER, Ridgefield Park, New Jersey
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Yes, it is about my dad.

on May. 13 2010 at 2:24 pm
Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Smile, happy looks good on you!!! ( :

Gosh ur rlly good keep on writing and maybe take a look at my piece called the wall

on May. 13 2010 at 10:13 am
another_teenage_itiot PLATINUM, Huston, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Why are we so angry
why are we so sad
we dont need to stare back
at everything we had

i totaly relate to this so much. my mom dithced me when i was eight years old. you might like one of my works "sorry mommy." I like this poem and I think you should write more.

on May. 12 2010 at 11:55 pm
Stormy16 SILVER, Tolleson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Music expresses that which cannot be said and on which it is impossible to be silent.
-Victor Hugo

Is this about your dad?


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