When You're Here

April 21, 2010
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When I needed you most,
you weren't around.
You missed fifth grade,
alond with my 11th birthday.
You aren't there when I'm sick,
or when I'm sad.
You come and go,
never staying long.
But when you're here,
all my troubles are gone.





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Syarra_Greenwood said...
May 13, 2010 at 2:24 pm
Gosh ur rlly good keep on writing and maybe take a look at my piece called the wall
 
vivi28cherries replied...
May 13, 2010 at 3:01 pm
Thanks so much.
 
another_teenage_itiot said...
May 13, 2010 at 10:13 am
i totaly relate to this so much. my mom dithced me when i was eight years old. you might like one of my works "sorry mommy." I like this poem and I think you should write more.
 
vivi28cherries replied...
May 13, 2010 at 3:00 pm
Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.
 
Stormy16 said...
May 12, 2010 at 11:55 pm
Is this about your dad?
 
vivi28cherries replied...
May 13, 2010 at 2:59 pm
Yes, it is about my dad.
 
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