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When will it be ok?

April 19, 2010
By KittyPanda DIAMOND, Cumberland, Rhode Island
KittyPanda DIAMOND, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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Behind the smile, underneath all the make-up,
There is a sad, sad girl who is trying desperately to hide her feelings.
But with each day passing, it gets harder and harder.
The smile is force and noticeable.
The make-up cannot hide the dark, sad eyes on her pale face.
With each night passing by,
She tosses and turns.
Only to wake up in the middle of the night.

What caused this girl so much pain? So much agony,
Where she cannot sleep at night?
The answer is simple,
The answer is Heart-breaking.
The answer is her life, her family.

The family that everyone thought to be happy and together,
Is now apart and mean.
They're not together anymore,
And are trying to get us against one another.
What happened to set this off?

No one knows.
The questions that matters are,
Can they live through this?
Can everything be ok like it used to be?... Just different?
Will we have to live in fear the rest of our lives?

When will it be ok?


The author's comments:
If your going threw or have gone threw the experience of your parents splitting up, you might feel like this. I know I do..

4/19/10

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on Jun. 30 2010 at 9:30 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

lolzz its ok:)

on Jun. 30 2010 at 9:06 pm
KittyPanda DIAMOND, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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i'm sorry. i'm pertty sure i ment to say really. lol.

on Jun. 27 2010 at 2:06 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

like what?

on Jun. 25 2010 at 11:49 am
KittyPanda DIAMOND, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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yaa, they're still in the prosses of it. not fun. lol. but it's like right?.

on May. 19 2010 at 3:58 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

yah. mine split when i was three, so i'm happy i wasn't really around for it. And their both already remarried

on May. 19 2010 at 2:26 pm
KittyPanda DIAMOND, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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thanks for the comment. and yeah, that's true you can relate it to anything. life's hard. but you just have to hold your head up high. i'm glad you like it. :)

on May. 19 2010 at 2:25 pm
KittyPanda DIAMOND, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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thanks for the comment. yeah, my parents are splitting up now, and it's torture. i'm not happy about it but hey, what can you do right?

on May. 11 2010 at 8:10 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow, my parents are split and i know exactly how you feel!!! Those were my thoughts

on May. 10 2010 at 9:04 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

My parents are still together, but I know that I've felt like this over other things. There is so much meaning here, and it would appeal to so many people. I love it.