When The Kingdom Falls (There Goes A Way Out From Here)

April 19, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


When the kingdom falls,
You will be left here to rot
In your misery and shame,
But you don’t have to go alone.
You can bring a friend
if you like,
So for once you can feel wanted,
And greeted-except by the nothingness
That will consume you
on your way down.
You will be able
to taste the sweet
Descent into madness.
If you’ve already tasted it,
Then your stomach
will bulge from too many
Mouthfuls of insanity.

This is the only place
that rotten people like you
Have left to go….

The feelings of your king
are bottled up.
He could not warn you
Of what this place holds.
Take your king and shatter him
into a million pieces.
Then piece them back together,
seal the cracks with superglue,
But only a little so that
justice can seep through.
Then set the bottle on fire.
Take it to the edge of a cliff,
and leave it their to burn.
Now this will be a very wild fire,
And it will spread rapidly,….
So Jump.



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. said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 9:49 pm
Feel free to overreact

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 5:20 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Ok, I'm not sure whether to laugh at that or be insulted.

. said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 2:18 pm
Yeah, with a little bit of "why wont the girl with the dictionary just use a french translator?"

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 5:46 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

The picture you chose for this piece is AWESOME! :) It really represents your poem. Plus, it's just an amazing picture, it's drawn so well. A mix of Alice in Wonderland and Dante's Inferno.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 5:44 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

My class doesn't start until January so I still don't understand what that means. :) What does it mean, by the way?

. said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 2:57 pm
Tres bien, tu dois apprendre pour que nous poulons practiquer

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 1:40 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

You're welcome! :) I think you should know that at my high school we have a choice of five different languages(Latin, Arabic, French, Spanish and Chinese) and I'm doing French. :)

on Sep. 23 2011 at 7:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

Haha. Merci, merci my love.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 3:16 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

This is very interesting. A lot of ideas are going through my mind such as... this poem reminds me of Hell. 

Also, right now I'm watching news about the debt ceiling and all I'm thinking about is our government descending into madness. 

Anyway, great job! LOVE THIS! :)


on Aug. 29 2010 at 10:59 am
Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Love can be lost but it will never be forgotten

thank you

on Aug. 24 2010 at 7:06 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

who's to tell you what you should improve on? but yeah, thats all good.

on Aug. 24 2010 at 2:12 pm
Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
36 articles 7 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love can be lost but it will never be forgotten

 

Its no problem, i like reading what everybody else has to say and i like giving and getting feedback it helps me see what i need to improve on


on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:11 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

merci for taking the time to read and commment on my stuff. i really comment your appreciate. merci tres beaucoup.

on Aug. 20 2010 at 1:43 pm
Puff_the_dragon PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
36 articles 7 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love can be lost but it will never be forgotten

I wish i had talent like this, my poems aren't nearly as amazing as yours

on Aug. 2 2010 at 6:09 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I suppose.

on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:30 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

oh, well you totally missed that one captain. redo your dance on the monkey.

on Jul. 29 2010 at 5:19 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I don't know, I was short on time and I needed something deep and meaningful to say.

on Jul. 28 2010 at 4:43 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

what do you mean you dont understand whi I'm doing my dance? thats like me saying i dont understand why you keep writing the bestesses. where are we captain? oh, they're up. read me captain.

on Jul. 26 2010 at 4:29 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Yes, you are, and I see that now, but...I just don't understand WHY.

on Jul. 26 2010 at 1:10 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

?what do you mean? am i not doing my dance on the monkey?


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