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Dear me untile death

Whose going to be there...
When I cry at night,
when I am in pain
when i am angry
when i want to succeed
when i dont want to break down any more

Whose going to...
hold me when I am alone
love me when i am unloved
take care of my needs
see me through the tough

Who can i count on
when i need trust
to see me in my darkest
to see me in my worst
to make sure i am alive

I am always seen
as the invincible
as the smart
as the brave
as the fearless

Do you see?
through this mask
my break waking everlasting urge to die
my yearning to break free from the chains
my broken wings
tater and torn in to piece that use to be my dreams


Just remember my last words
I love you self
I need you love
love me more
good bye to the world



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SammyJo1318 said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 11:01 pm:
Wow! this is REALLY good :)
 
ripple_of_life replied...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 2:05 pm :
aws thanks you im glad you enjoyed it
 
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fLaPjaCk said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 1:07 pm:
I love this!! You're an amazing writer, and i know i feel like this alot, and mabye that's why this strikes such a chord for me, you should check out my stuff plz, i like comments too :D
 
ripple_of_life replied...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 2:32 pm :
thank you very much and i will be sure to check your writings out. i will be posting more poems very soon!
 
fLaPjaCk replied...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 2:34 pm :

I can't wait :D

 

 
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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 8:00 pm:
I would for sure if any of my friends were the creative peotic type!!! I wishi  could put up a bulliten board on this site that says all of these great peoms that i'm the first commenter on-like where is everyone else? I mean people need to read this!!!
 
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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:17 pm:
Wow! that was great!!! (wow i post alot of the first commments-and for good peoms! what is everyone else reading-they need to read this!!!) I loved it-keep writing!!!!
 
ripple_of_life replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:38 pm :
why thank you im one of spur of the moment type writers so wen i write its all from the heart
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:47 pm :
Thats' awesome-it shows!!!
 
ripple_of_life replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:55 pm :
thanks for being my first commentor hope u tell ur friends i love comments and new readers
 
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