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Heartless

April 20, 2010
By DejaVu SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
DejaVu SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
All is fair in love and war


Here on my own,
Slowly turning to stone,
Losing my mind,
Forgetting to find,
The small, lost,
Heart I tossed,
To try and forget,
The one I falsely loved, yet,
I know I need to forget,
But I feel I need yet,
To remember her shallow,
Cold, hardened, not mellow,
So I can not make,
The same mistake,
Of falling in love,
With a cold blooded dove.



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Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2010 at 12:34 pm
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

you are so talented! its really hard for me to explain these emotions, but ou did it perfectly.

Metree SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 10:35 am
Metree SILVER, Machipongo, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 20 comments
this was really good and beautifully rhymed :)

on May. 10 2010 at 5:48 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

That was the best lovesick peom i've ever read-can't wait to read more!

on May. 10 2010 at 10:44 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

this is by farr the bestt poem thatt i have read! :D i lovee it hunn! you deff. should keep wrightingg. comment mine and ratee tell me whatt you thinkk (: plz and thanxxx ! <3<3 xoxoxo

Miseltoe GOLD said...
on May. 7 2010 at 5:50 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

Its interesting the feelings behind the surface. Sometimes its hard giving up the things we are so familiar to. I remember how much my heart ached when I ended it until I saw how much his feelings for me were a lie