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Like a field of sunflowers
singing under the sun
your happiness is my happiness.

Like the weeping tulips
under gray skies
your sadness is my sadness.

Like the bursting red rose
in between out hands
your love is my love.

Like the blooming garden all around us,
You become me and I become you.



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ashleycsy_09 said...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 6:33 pm
Wow another amazing poem!
 
Stargirl212 said...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 1:46 pm
Great poem Kirthi!
 
allisont said...
May 27, 2010 at 9:33 pm
I vote or this one!
 
Kassandra H. said...
May 27, 2010 at 5:39 pm
I vote for this!!!!!
 
Mandy said...
May 25, 2010 at 5:55 pm

Your happiness is my happiness ... your sadness is my sadness ... your love is my love

I love that (:

 
DENIZ said...
May 6, 2010 at 7:51 pm

I have heard of this before.

   ' Your sadness is my sadness '

and

   ' Your happiness is my happiness '

BUT.

ONCE AGAIN GOOD JOB!

 
readingvacation replied...
May 24, 2010 at 8:46 pm

Kirthi,

Love this!  You are a great writer.

 

Melina

 
readingvacation replied...
May 24, 2010 at 8:49 pm
I am going to try to vote again. I tried to click each star individually and it got stuck on the first star.  That should be a 5 star vote not a one star vote.
 
sillysami said...
May 6, 2010 at 4:03 pm
just like others I LOVE FLOWERS! this is short and sweet just llike kirthi.
 
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