North Shore

April 17, 2010
By hulagirl BRONZE, Haleiwa, Hawaii
hulagirl BRONZE, Haleiwa, Hawaii
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you aren't winning you're losing, if you are losing try your hardest to win,"
-Mr. Rechs History Teacher, Basketball Coach


Waves go up.Up down
Up
Currents flow back.Back forth
Back
Tides are rising.Rising falling Rising
Sets will be coming.Coming leaving Coming
Water is pulling.Pulling pushing Pulling
This is the motion of the ocean changing.
Changing
Changing
Changing.


The author's comments:
I was sitting on the beach on the island of Oahu in Hawaii when a few waves caught my eye. Sitting there I had words of repetition pop into my head, I scribbled them down and this is what I wrote.

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on Nov. 15 2010 at 7:31 pm
hulagirl BRONZE, Haleiwa, Hawaii
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
" If you aren't winning you're losing, if you are losing try your hardest to win,"
-Mr. Rechs History Teacher, Basketball Coach

Thanks! It is honestly the most beautiful place in the world.  I am so lucky I get to live here.

on Nov. 13 2010 at 7:22 pm
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
8 articles 2 photos 513 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not for tomorrow

This is really, really good! I'd love to go back there! Great job! Well done!! :)


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