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Living in bliss

Every time I see you I tremble,
Shivers take over by force,
You always leave me breathless,
Yet I feel no remorse.

Words of unspoken truth,
Are left hanging in the air,
Words that are sweet and tender,
Words that show you care.

To trust is a hard thing to do,
TO trust you must be sure,
To live in the moment of things to be,
And not or things that were.

Yet here we are again,
Living in such perfect bliss,
Angels whisper it's meant to be,
And it all starts with a kiss.



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DifferentTeen said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 7:01 pm:

Greatly written, although I don't understand it.

Check out my work?

 
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maybeshannon said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 10:32 pm:
ohkay this is by far my favoritee!!!  maybe because i just had my first kiss but whatever i still love it!!! =]] if i could meet you i would lol can you check outt some others of mine too?? =]
 
insaneprincess replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 3:32 pm :
awwee : and lmfao ofcourse ! :D <3
 
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Kairah027 said...
May 11, 2010 at 3:10 pm:
Amazing, actually more than amazing :)
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 11, 2010 at 9:28 pm :
yes, indeed your writing is ;D thanks m'trench buddy ;D <3
 
Kairah027 replied...
May 12, 2010 at 10:54 am :
NO YOU'RE WRITING :)
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 12, 2010 at 2:44 pm :
ahahahaha no.
 
Kairah027 replied...
May 12, 2010 at 4:04 pm :
Haha yes :)
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 12, 2010 at 4:21 pm :

the two of us

because :

two is better than one * <3

 
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insaneprincess said...
May 9, 2010 at 11:36 am:
OMG, thank  you so much! Thanks thanks thanks !!!! 
 
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~*)Wish(*~ said...
May 9, 2010 at 11:14 am:
probably one of the best so far. :) give yourself a pat on the back this is amazing.
 
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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 6, 2010 at 11:04 pm:
HAHAHAHAHAH!!! you did it. you have successfullly captured the moment of love that many people on teen ink will relate to!!!!!!!!- if they find this poem.
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 7, 2010 at 4:55 pm :

THANK YOU SO MUCH! you made my day ! :)

thanks thanks thanks !

Want to help me help people find it?

Thanks soo much !

:) !!

 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 7, 2010 at 5:09 pm :
how can i help you mr or misses creative streak?
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 7, 2010 at 5:31 pm :

Miss ;D

aha , and creative streak ?

& i'm not sure : /

get people to vote for it or comment so it can get more recognition (Y)

 

also - i looked at some of your work : it is  amazing.

 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 7, 2010 at 8:16 pm :
which poems did you look at-i know i have alot-but i wanna know which ones yuo're reffering to-i need the feedback. (thank you). i will be doing that for you.
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 8, 2010 at 12:35 pm :
Thanks sooo much!! :) & I will comment on them xD
 
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