Living in bliss

April 16, 2010

Every time I see you I tremble,
Shivers take over by force,
You always leave me breathless,
Yet I feel no remorse.

Words of unspoken truth,
Are left hanging in the air,
Words that are sweet and tender,
Words that show you care.

To trust is a hard thing to do,
TO trust you must be sure,
To live in the moment of things to be,
And not or things that were.

Yet here we are again,
Living in such perfect bliss,
Angels whisper it's meant to be,
And it all starts with a kiss.


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on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:01 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

Greatly written, although I don't understand it.

Check out my work?


on Jun. 9 2010 at 3:32 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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awwee : and lmfao ofcourse ! :D <3

on Jun. 8 2010 at 10:32 pm
maybeshannon DIAMOND, Keller, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"you just can't recreate stupid." --jacobbbb
"i just saw the picture of epicness... M&M guitar!!" --kevin brown
"our love is so dumbbb" --sean kingston
"if perfect's what you're searchin' for then just stay the same" --bruno mars <333 =]

ohkay this is by far my favoritee!!!  maybe because i just had my first kiss but whatever i still love it!!! =]] if i could meet you i would lol can you check outt some others of mine too?? =]

on May. 12 2010 at 4:21 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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the two of us

because :

two is better than one * <3


k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 4:04 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Haha yes :)

on May. 12 2010 at 2:44 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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ahahahaha no.

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 10:54 am
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

NO YOU'RE WRITING :)

on May. 11 2010 at 9:28 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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yes, indeed your writing is ;D thanks m'trench buddy ;D <3

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 3:10 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Amazing, actually more than amazing :)

on May. 9 2010 at 11:36 am
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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OMG, thank  you so much! Thanks thanks thanks !!!! 

on May. 9 2010 at 11:14 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

probably one of the best so far. :) give yourself a pat on the back this is amazing.

on May. 8 2010 at 12:35 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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Thanks sooo much!! :) & I will comment on them xD

on May. 7 2010 at 8:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

which poems did you look at-i know i have alot-but i wanna know which ones yuo're reffering to-i need the feedback. (thank you). i will be doing that for you.

on May. 7 2010 at 5:31 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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Miss ;D

aha , and creative streak ?

& i'm not sure : /

get people to vote for it or comment so it can get more recognition (Y)

 

also - i looked at some of your work : it is  amazing.


on May. 7 2010 at 5:09 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

how can i help you mr or misses creative streak?

on May. 7 2010 at 4:55 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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THANK YOU SO MUCH! you made my day ! :)

thanks thanks thanks !

Want to help me help people find it?

Thanks soo much !

:) !!


on May. 6 2010 at 11:04 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

HAHAHAHAHAH!!! you did it. you have successfullly captured the moment of love that many people on teen ink will relate to!!!!!!!!- if they find this poem.


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