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Last Love

he is a rainbow on a day with no sun
a hug that never leaves
a teddy bear worn from all the tears that have been laid on it from heartbreak
he is a tear that never falls but instead kisses your cheek
he is the very definition of love itself
he is all of these things but above all he is life




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Secret_Love_Tells said...
May 13, 2010 at 9:56 am:
Ahhh! That is so cute! I love it so much! Good job Maggs!
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 14, 2010 at 6:30 am :
Thanks Mikayla!
 
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jonas_chick899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 13, 2010 at 7:10 am:
awww, but you have wonderful awesome word choice!!!!!
 
sNIKerz replied...
May 13, 2010 at 8:43 am :

-Claps- This is amazing! I loved it! Great job sis! Keep on writting, Your awesome at it (:

- Xo Nikki(:

 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 13, 2010 at 8:43 am :
Thanks for the comment.
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 13, 2010 at 8:44 am :
Thanks sis you know how much that means to me
 
Mistress_Of_The_Night replied...
May 13, 2010 at 8:56 am :
hey maggs this is GOOD! GREAT! and everything in the middle lolzz !
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 14, 2010 at 6:29 am :
Thanks Krissy.
 
sydney_hopeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 14, 2010 at 8:28 am :
I really do love this :)
 
Poison_Ivy replied...
May 14, 2010 at 8:36 am :
Thanks everybody for the comments I really do apperciate them
 
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