Company

It comes
It goes
It Toos
It Fros

It leaves
It stays
It Decembers
It Mays

It never comes back
It forgets your name
It leaves no note
Like it never even came





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sethB said...
May 29, 2010 at 8:20 pm
This one i can relate too!
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 8:19 pm
I like this one because instead of skipping fifty lines between stanzas and leaving sensless fragment sentences like"love.its good. its bad. it hurts." you gave us something we can actually enjoy. thats a true deviation from the norm   5 stars. this is incrediblism speaking to us all......
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:27 pm
everything that you just said was the exactly the kinda comment i was looking for and needed! This was just a simple poem on the surface but with a deeper meaning and it looks like you got that!
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 8:16 pm
thanks you too!! i just wrote this poem today and submitted it-called Wait for Tomorrow-you should check that out first!!
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:56 pm

I will, i bet its good! you seem like

you'd be really talented by all the

excitement you have for writing!!

 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:58 pm
Thanks!!! I just love writing!!! so amazing!!! I hope that i am talented
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 29, 2010 at 8:19 pm
Ill check out your stuff!
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:54 pm
That means so much that you don't even no-thank you!!!
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 8:13 pm
Keep writing!(:
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:44 pm
I don't lie!!!!
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:49 pm
I can't wait took look at your work!
 
jessica.cherish.conner said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:42 pm

me too!ahah

it gives meee the chills

 
jessica.cherish.conner said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:42 pm
thanks girly!
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 7:36 pm
I like this one too!!! Very creative!!
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:43 pm
awwww thankksss sooo muchh!!(:
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 12:31 pm
I love the last four lines.
 
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 10, 2010 at 7:44 pm

Aww thanks mee too!

it gives me the chills!

 
Sethb replied...
May 29, 2010 at 8:21 pm
Me too that one was best
 
Bianca said...
May 8, 2010 at 1:14 pm
I really like this one too!
 
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