Ashes

April 11, 2010
By jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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If I die don't
tell them

They will know already

Because my desicions have
shown em'

Desicions that i took slow an steady

They have already tied me down to get me sane

It's always too late to put out the flame



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on Aug. 18 2010 at 10:09 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

okay, i dont want this to sound rude so i'll say this first:i love depressing pessimistic stuff. with that being said, i love the last line. its like the most negative depressing "give up and die " thing i've ever heard. i love it. 5 stars captain.oh, i like the whole thing too. do your dance.

Lexiiscool said...
on May. 29 2010 at 8:24 pm
OH my GOOOSSSSHHH! i like it alot, so 5 stars for this!!

on May. 11 2010 at 7:08 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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That would be great.. but im not wishing on a star or anything...

 

im just hoping ha!

thanks(:


Poemgirl said...
on May. 11 2010 at 12:22 am
This needs to be published! it yearns to be!! iits just screaming "hey you ..im ovaa here!!publish me already hahaha"

on May. 10 2010 at 8:42 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Yah, but i'm going to do this book first-it has a better plot and i know more now (than when i was writing the other one) you know?

on May. 10 2010 at 8:40 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

articulate, poetically yeah:) ch-ching.

on May. 10 2010 at 8:33 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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"penstrokes of a poetry master"? yup ill take that(: ahaha

i totally agree with your whole statement there on a monolog of pure nothingness..

keep writing because everything you write is written with immense feeling.. and i can tell your very articulate(:


on May. 10 2010 at 8:30 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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You DEFINATELY should.. you'll regret it if you dont.

on May. 10 2010 at 8:24 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you have the penstrokes of a poetry master-someone who can give us a few sentences of meaning instead of monologues of pure nothingness....5 stars captain. and the last line is very nice.

on May. 10 2010 at 8:19 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

yah i'm trying to write a book -i'm finishing planning it out so that this summer all i have to do is write and then idk what i'm going to do to publish it-i started a book that was 99 pages when i was like 10 but i never finished-maybe i'll pick up on that again!

on May. 10 2010 at 8:16 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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7th grade? its good that your starting now! i wish i did!!(:

on May. 10 2010 at 8:15 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

7th grade and i live in Missouri

on May. 10 2010 at 8:12 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

I know right! what's up w/ that????

on May. 10 2010 at 8:11 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

7th and i live in Missouri-where do you live?

on May. 10 2010 at 8:04 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Yess!all true!

what grade are you in?


on May. 10 2010 at 8:02 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

yah. Because there's just so many articles on this sight!!! I can't wait until mine are posted!!! I'm so impatient!!I love seeing that there are all of these peotic, artsy people because i am the only one in my grade.

on May. 10 2010 at 7:58 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Haha i know!... its but the good writings are always hard to find.!

on May. 10 2010 at 7:51 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

I totally know how you feel-i keep reading a lot of good peoms where i'm the first one to comment-its like-hello? where is everyone-read these!!!!

on May. 10 2010 at 7:47 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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oh no ..i have older friends who did ahaha.! But i just wish more people would read my poems! i want them too be published soo bad!

on May. 10 2010 at 7:46 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow, that's a great story!!! YOur friends got scholarships when they were freshmen??


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