Hungry MAG

April 10, 2010
By Caligirl SILVER, Denver, Colorado
Caligirl SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Take a bite out of the moon
Night is a feast
You choose to diet on sun rays
while I eat the stars
like pop rocks



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on Apr. 10 2012 at 10:45 pm
Caligirl SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Thank you so much I appreciate it :)

on Apr. 10 2012 at 10:20 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

This is a great poem :) I love the symbolism and language you use, the word choice is lovely. Great writing!

on Oct. 24 2010 at 10:36 pm
Caligirl SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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I shall! :D

on Oct. 24 2010 at 10:35 pm
Caligirl SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it

on Oct. 7 2010 at 1:48 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

wow i seriously love this. its amazing. i had to read it a couple of times to make some sense out of it, and when i did, i was like woah

on Oct. 7 2010 at 1:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

They gotta love it captain. they just have to. do your dance. i love this.


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