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Deep Blue

Going deeper,
Deeper into the blue
Pressure's building up,
I am not wanting to
come to the surface.

I'm wanting to go deeper into the blue,
To drown in my pool of lies,
Lies I told myself..

Falling deeper until I feel,
the burning in my lungs
wanting air.

Going deeper
Deeper into the blue
Till its ice cold,
The pain with
The sayings of lies
Is ice cold.
I suffocate.





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_Elsy_ said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 6:53 pm
wow is all i can say :D, you are a good poet and i can relate to your poem. Can you check out some of my stuff?
 
_Elsy_ replied...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 7:10 pm

my screen name is _Elsy_

Teen Ink just won't let me login or logout so it won't show the name

 
ktbug96 said...
May 18, 2010 at 4:20 pm

thanks for the comment :) i love this poem... i can really relate to this because ... well... i have a lot of pressure on me xD

great job!

 
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