The World

April 1, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


Walking along

This path untaken

I realize

The current situation

Is all we have left

Of this world

As it spins

As it twirls

We are the waiting

We are the lost

We have nothing

To look forward to again

Absolutely nothing

To wait for anymore

We as a whole

Not as singles

Worlds are dying

And we can prevent it

We just have to work

Together to save them

We just have to

We as a whole

Not as singles

Join in hands

And fall together

Because if we fall

We'll fall with eachother

We'll fall as friends

Saving this world

To make amends

Of all the problems

We caused now must be fixed

Now of all times

It's going to be hard

But we need to do it

It's going to be hard

But it's absolutely worth it



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on May. 5 2010 at 9:52 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

thanks:)  makes me feel good that people like my work

on May. 5 2010 at 9:51 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

thanks!! wasn't one of my favorites though... but happy you liked it:)

on May. 3 2010 at 4:07 pm
Anique_ThePoet GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
10 articles 33 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer should write with his eyes and painter paint with his ears." ~Gertrude Stein~

i liked this alot, you can go a lot ways with this.

on May. 3 2010 at 8:27 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

wow LOVE IT!!! very good poem:)))


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