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Standing with a passion. To show that I am strong.
I told myself that I would not be strong only on the inside but also on the outside. I don’t want to be missed judged by something that is only on the outside. But you’re the only thing makes me strong because you are the only person that has my heart. You my true love and the only person I want to be with and to make me the strong person I am today. Without you I am nothing like the wind going through my hair.



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Russell said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 4:30 pm

Nice poem.

However, 'missed judged' is incorrect, I believe you mean 'misjudged.'

I'm also assuming that you intended for this to be not grammatically correct? Most poems don't need to have proper grammar, but if this was the case then the poem still needs to flow together. In my opinion 'But you're the only one thing makes me strong because you are the only person that has my heart. You my true love and the only person I want to be with and to make me the strong person I a... (more »)

 
lilylovesyou said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 4:27 pm
Cool poem 111
 
punksk8rgurll said...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 1:02 pm
Amazing...........
 
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