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March 30, 2010
By thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."


Click here to begin.
Click here to start.
Should I not have clicked in?
And just stayed smart?

I bet my money
And rolled a die.
I don’t think it’s funny
That it was all a lie.

To a four leaf clover
I gave my luck
Begged for it not to be over
Now I am stuck.

A chance I took
I went the friendship way.
But unlike a book,
The ship sailed away.

What are the remnants?
What was left behind?
Where has everything been sent?
Will I make up my mind?

No one deserves
So why do I give it out,
Like passing hors d’oeuvres?
I send without a doubt.

Click here to finish.
Click here to end.
We will perish.
Goodbye friend.



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on Oct. 3 2010 at 1:56 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

thank you so much!!

on Oct. 3 2010 at 1:56 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow thx! :)

on Aug. 23 2010 at 3:34 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

yepp, 'unique' is a good word to describe this poem:) (like the comment below) this was really good n verry well-written! ur a fantastic writer ^^

on Jun. 27 2010 at 11:19 am
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

for me, when i wrote this, it was during a hard time in my life when I was dealing with some friend issues. thx so much for reviewing!

on Jun. 3 2010 at 7:58 pm
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
22 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

This is very unique, and i appreciate that. This is a great peice with a great message that is great because it can be several different messages at once.... few people have that ability.... appearently *someone* does ;)

on May. 19 2010 at 8:54 pm
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

I think, at a child's birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

this is really, very good

on May. 19 2010 at 7:00 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

I really like this! It has sort of a mysterious flavor to it and made me wonder what inspired you to write this. I think it could mean something different to everybody, which is really cool. You're an incredible writer!

jgt4 said...
on May. 2 2010 at 11:51 am
this is a very different concept. i wonder what you were thinking when you decided to begin it with "click here." it's very interesting and i really like it!


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