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Click here to begin.
Click here to start.
Should I not have clicked in?
And just stayed smart?

I bet my money
And rolled a die.
I don’t think it’s funny
That it was all a lie.

To a four leaf clover
I gave my luck
Begged for it not to be over
Now I am stuck.

A chance I took
I went the friendship way.
But unlike a book,
The ship sailed away.

What are the remnants?
What was left behind?
Where has everything been sent?
Will I make up my mind?

No one deserves
So why do I give it out,
Like passing hors d’oeuvres?
I send without a doubt.

Click here to finish.
Click here to end.
We will perish.
Goodbye friend.





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introducing.me_899 said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 3:34 pm
yepp, 'unique' is a good word to describe this poem:) (like the comment below) this was really good n verry well-written! ur a fantastic writer ^^
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 1:56 pm
wow thx! :)
 
Brian_Lambert said...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 7:58 pm
This is very unique, and i appreciate that. This is a great peice with a great message that is great because it can be several different messages at once.... few people have that ability.... appearently *someone* does ;)
 
SarahJumps said...
May 19, 2010 at 8:54 pm
this is really, very good
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 1:56 pm
thank you so much!!
 
WritingLoverForever said...
May 19, 2010 at 7:00 pm
I really like this! It has sort of a mysterious flavor to it and made me wonder what inspired you to write this. I think it could mean something different to everybody, which is really cool. You're an incredible writer!
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 11:19 am
for me, when i wrote this, it was during a hard time in my life when I was dealing with some friend issues. thx so much for reviewing!
 
jgt4 said...
May 2, 2010 at 11:51 am
this is a very different concept. i wonder what you were thinking when you decided to begin it with "click here." it's very interesting and i really like it!
 
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