This Night, I Swear I Have Felt It Before

March 30, 2010
By Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost


I swear I heard it oh,
I swear I heard that heart break,
A thousand miles away seems so far,
When I told her I had to go,
Go take some time
Think about this past year.
I need to take it slow,
Take my time,
Pick this situation a-part.
Its been to long for me to call this home.
We swore we'd have each other,
Agreed on nothing more
We would never let go.
I'd be all you want and more.
But these cross-roads,
Bring back so many times,
Thousand memories bout how you held me,
Held my threads to this broken mended heart.
You know you had me,
Right there holding on,
Praying for this right,
Begging for no wrong,
But time just doesn't freeze for that long.
This was not my fault.
Here we go now,
End that scene and let's begin take two,
You pulled up to my drive way.
Bringing back that smile on my face
Arise my nervous shakes
It's like the past was over,
And this could be a start,
A start of something new.
We got this down like we used to,
I smile, take your hand in mine,
We walk down these isles,
Smile one and one, blocking out the sun,
No one else could compete with the way we were complete,
You're taking me home,
My legs are shaking,
Nothing left but to close my eyes,
Then look out your window.
The city lights again,
We past this place so many times before.
I close my eyes so tight,
I feel your hand upon mine.
I turn my palm and question my whole heart,
Is this doing right, should it be so bright,
Its the middle of the night,
When did we mark this on our plight.
I looked into your eye,
You looked deep back in mine,
Time would have never,
Run as slow that time.
To taste those lips,
Or grab the handle.
I thought it once,
Drempt it twice.
Pulled the handle and complete this night
You see I'm not quiet ready
My head is not on my neck as steady.
As that first cold night,
We locked our lips so tight.
And now I set my feet.
Listen to the beat,
From your car.
I turn my head and say nothing at all.
And I waited for your call,
As you left.
I shut the door slow I swear.
I walked into this room I could not bare.

The author's comments:
about giving a girl who hurt you another chance to make whats right because you love them

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on Jun. 24 2010 at 6:17 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow!!!! this is insanely good!!! awesome job-i love it-u wrote it so well and it has such a great flow!!! check out some of my work if you get the chance!!!

Kuyler GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 11:29 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

haha except i can't find a beat to make lyrics to save my life >.<

Kuyler GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 11:28 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

i like to think i can :) i sing almost all the time but whether im good or not i have no clue :)

Kuyler GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 11:21 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

its about giving an ex a second chance. let your friends know about my poems i would love it :)

on May. 20 2010 at 5:38 am
mikaylaquinn GOLD, NewCastle, Pennsylvania
17 articles 7 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
~♥life is your own personal fairy tale, you gotta do what ever you need to do to make it come true!♥~

i love thi poemm!!♥ would u be able to comment on some of my poems sometime??

on May. 19 2010 at 8:18 pm
forgottenpenname GOLD, Troy, Michigan
12 articles 0 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Carpe diem."

Seems like it would make awesome lyrics. :)

dianaforfree said...
on May. 19 2010 at 5:28 pm

could be song lyrics, i think! and i'd listen certainly. just fine.

can you sing? (=


on May. 19 2010 at 4:45 pm
Vivallaa PLATINUM, NYC, New York
44 articles 89 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
\'Before you stalk and overrun, you can\'t devour anyone.\'

who is this about? i'm so curious. is this about your girlfriend?

Kuyler GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 9:13 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

for the record i know there are 2 typo's working on getting them out >.<

Desi<3Lee said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 7:10 pm
This is awesome dude! Its soo sweet and so many things in there are true i liked it :) A+!!!

Kuyler GOLD said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:52 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

you are so sweeet :)

Ramona said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:46 pm

This is wicked

i love it

uv got talent :] this is incredible :DD


Kuyler GOLD said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:44 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

and I LOVE YOU

Kuyler GOLD said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:43 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

aaaaaaaaaand i love you :)

Kuyler GOLD said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:43 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

and i love you

Lindsay said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:43 pm

It's amazing :)

You're very talented love.!

Keep up the good work<3


Kuyler GOLD said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:42 pm
Kuyler GOLD, Coal Valley, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference." - Robert Frost

i love you <3

joeeyftw said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:35 pm
oh my goodness, this is amazing. <3 i love it :D

Ghosti said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:25 pm
This is amazing, I can't even exsplain. Great job, & keep writing :)

omgmoo said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 11:17 pm
 ur god. Very nice


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