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You Make Me

March 30, 2010
By Uacobit BRONZE, Penn Valley, California
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Uacobit BRONZE, Penn Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
"All I can be is me, whoever that is" -bob dylan-

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I feel like water,
Destination unknown
Flowing as i please
Filled with the floating breeze


The days grow longer,
My thoughts shorter
A morning walk to enjoy reality

Euphoric life consists of nothing,
And only one thing,
A mind at peace.

The author's comments:
I wrote this after a night with a beautiful girl who was slowly winning my heart
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