March 29, 2010
By Crystal Kimble BRONZE, Long Beach, California
Crystal Kimble BRONZE, Long Beach, California
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Everyday I thought about you.
Everyday I wish that our love was
really true.
Everyday I tried so hard
to make you see that our love
was meant to be.
Now everyday that you’re not in town
my world is upside

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on Mar. 11 2011 at 5:34 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

This is really amazing.  I don't know why, but when I read this I heard it as a song.  If you're any good at singing, you might want to consider extending the stanzas into verses :)

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