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Seductive Vampire

do i have you hypnotized,
can you see my big blue eyes
and am i all you ever wanted?

do i have you captivated,
can't you see the trap is baited?
but you're falling right into it

don't you know that wine is tainted
can you see the face I've painted?
doesn't matter, it's too late now

cuz you're caught up in your fantasies
they're pooling in your head like seas
i don't know if you can... turn back now

can you feel your heart going?
in your veins your blood is flowing
i can feel your heart beating

do you feel intoxicated?
sorry, i shouldn't have waited
but i love to toy with you

don't try to put up a fight
you're so close i think i might
i can hear it running through... it'd be easy

cuz you're caught up in your fantasies
they're pooling in your head like seas
i don't know if i can... turn back now





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RedTornado said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 9:00 am
very nice wordplay here
 
SavingAngel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 5, 2010 at 9:02 am
Thank you! I'm very proud of this one. -angel
 
BleedingRose replied...
May 14, 2010 at 10:36 am

You should be proud of this one, it's absolutely stunning!  I love it, so descriptive and yes, a great use of wordplay.  ;) 

-Rose 

 
SavingAngel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 15, 2010 at 1:09 pm

Thank you! I really appreciate you commenting on my stuff, Rose, you give me good feedback!

-angel

 
RedTornado replied...
May 17, 2010 at 6:06 pm
gotta love the big blue eyes
 
SavingAngel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 19, 2010 at 8:54 am

Lol yeah the big blue eyes! ;)

-angel

 
BleedingRose replied...
May 19, 2010 at 9:54 pm

I'm loving the blue!  ;)

-Rose

 
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