Broken Promises

March 23, 2010
By ForevrQuanae BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
ForevrQuanae BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
Go beyond the ski's . Achieve more than life


Broken Promises

take a bow
As it's time to go now
talking softly
whispering deeply
What am I supposed to think?
thoughts like a soft bird
Thinking about all the spoken words

If I can just take it back
The time I used to believe
The time I used to dream

Thoughts in my mind
shatter like a broke glass
Surrounding me in a world of disseat
I rather stand alone
Then be on my knees
I could've listened
but i missed it
This is just another one of your BROKEN PROMISES


The author's comments:
I was inspired by the way people always promise people things and never do it. This poem is near & dear to my heart.

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teach BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 4:16 pm
teach BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is Hell. The way to deal with it is to find your hapiness. No matter what. "

This poem is the best one I have heard. I belive in this. This is a moving peice.




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