On the Edge

April 2, 2010
By Heather Manning PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
Heather Manning PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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Have you ever been
On the edge of
Despair
Nothing is going right
Losing your grip on reality
Feeling your emotions
Sink you lower and
Lower into the darkness of the
Unknown
Never knowing
When you are going to return from the
Edge or
When you will be there again
All you can do is hope and dream
Then you can start
Climbing away from the edge
If you find yourself
Stuck on the edge
Someone will come with their hand
To help you
You choose
To take that hand or
Leave that hand empty
On the Edge
Waiting


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CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 9:53 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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I understand this feeling and like the message (: Keep it up!

on Apr. 18 2010 at 4:40 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

youre welcome, anytime

on Apr. 18 2010 at 4:35 pm
Heather Manning PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
46 articles 0 photos 9 comments
Thank You :)

on Apr. 18 2010 at 4:13 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
30 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

this is really good and relateable, i love your choice of diction, keep writing. you're very good...

on Apr. 18 2010 at 1:29 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

this reminds me of a dream I had once I think you did a great job putting this feeling into words:) would you mind commenting on my work?


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