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He took her heart onto of a New York skyscraper,
threw it to the ground and watched it shatter on the hot pavement.
Then laughed an evil laugh as he watched it be stepped on until
it was only tiny little pieces.
He collected it in a tiny bag
and returned it to her with a smug smile.
"have your heart" was all he said<3




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Imaninjabutterflyghost said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 6:48 pm:
I like it a lot :)
 
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MacKenzie C. said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 10:36 pm:
Wow!  I really loved it, keep it up!
 
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Denali.B. said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 8:25 pm:
Wow...i really like all of ur stuff so far, lol, good job *Smile*
 
kayla_boo replied...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 11:09 am :
this was great i loved it so..... idk what the word is it was rele good
 
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ntaggy123 said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 12:05 pm:
i really like it..i can relate..
 
Sammie1997 replied...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 7:44 pm :
Love this! totally can relate! this is a sad thing about ppl :( If this happened to you Im TERRIBLY sorry! keep doing what ur doing! this was great u have some honest talent :)
 
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xBaByGiRrL22xThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 9:34 pm:
whoa. luvvv it;) this is short, yet soo deep..i think the last line makes it even stronger. truly amazing job!:)
 
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TY00702 said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 2:57 pm:
pretty good, short and to the point yet deep, keep doing this cause honestly people need to learn how to be creative and this is creativity
 
*_sam_* replied...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 3:52 pm :
Thanks(: that means alot to me(:
 
*_sam_* replied...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 3:52 pm :
Hey thanks(:
 
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sparkofheart said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 6:45 pm:
awesome talent you really know how to paint a picture :) good work
 
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Supernova7 said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 1:25 am:
very meaningful reminds me of this jerk I know  You have talent:)
 
*_sam_* replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 8:35 am :
Thank youu(:
 
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EleanorRigby This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 1:32 pm:
I have written such a similar poem to this, it's almost creepy. I haven't posted it up yet, and now I think I won't bother. I like this poem very much, so good job! read some of my poems if you get the chance!
 
*_sam_* replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 8:34 am :
Oh, please post it! i want to see how similar they are(: thank youu(:
 
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silentwriting said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 10:37 am:

I loved it! Its short but it has so much meaning. You,my friend, are really talented.

Dream big!:D

 
*_sam_* replied...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 10:57 am :
Thanks, it means alot(:
 
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Peaceful_Beauty said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 10:26 am:
This is kinda depressing and very cruial...who in their right mind would want to hurt someone like that...i truely love this one...
 
*_sam_* replied...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 10:57 am :
Thanks so much(:
 
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Whisperer said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 5:28 pm:

this is really interesting and cool. it's different and unique which makes it inspiring. thank you for sharing :)

check out my stuff if you want.

 
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