Life's Words

March 22, 2010
By CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
24 articles 197 photos 166 comments

Crosses
Sparrows
Words
Agany
Hope
All mixed up in me
Withholding
Breach
Reaching out
For that spark
Where are you
What have you become
A villian
A hero
Triumph
Stranded
Mangled
Forever more fright
Consumed
With being
Paralyzed
Controlled
still
Crawling
For help
Craving
Grabbing
The source
Key
Spare me heart
Love
Forever bidding
Taking
Hurting
Spilling
Drinking
Caring
Fighting
Weak
Crumbling
Dirt
Falling
Dieing
Seeing
Hearing
Feeling
Tasting
Screaming
Dealth
Light
Clouds
Sky
Sun
Rays
Colors
Spirts
Emotion
Free
Heaven
LIFE



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Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:38 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Yea but you're good.. and I like the title I forgot 2 mention that ..

on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:37 pm
CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
24 articles 197 photos 166 comments
I'm pretty sure i'm average, sometimes :D

Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:32 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Like like Like! GOod job!

its intresting & creative I like every bit of it.. you got a talent in different ways :)


on Jun. 19 2010 at 6:36 pm
CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
24 articles 197 photos 166 comments
yep thanks i just started writing random words that were interesting to me at that time to see what it would turn out be be like and then when i got near the end i read it myself and thought that the dealth part would be cool( hearing, smeolling, etc. then life)

on Jun. 19 2010 at 5:53 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

heyy this went together in a great way that i could understand!! kool jobb. i liked it




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