the fatal kiss/dream

March 21, 2010
Two fourteen year oold teens in love
Staring breathlessley at eachother
both hearts beating slowly
Boy leans forward closing his dark colored eyes
Girl then leans in closing her eyes
quietness surrounds them in the dark sky
lips touch softly and smoothly
Girl and boy thinks the kiss is like fireworks in the sky
As the wonderful moment ends boy leaves girl staring into what used to be him
The girl now twenty years old and relizes the boy was just a fatal dream and there was no boy
Girl is left crying herself a river because her love is gone
boy died in a fire two years before
her first and last true love is gone forever
What shall she do now ?

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Tha1Chick said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 9:51 pm
well  this is tha1 chiks cuzin ashleyluv22 amd she thinks this is deep!    
Mikayla Q. said...
May 15, 2010 at 12:40 pm
aww!! i love itt.. its really sad tho but also really good!!!
CrazyMK This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 1, 2010 at 12:52 pm
I love it! Very deep and sad...
xoxoskaterchickxoxo replied...
May 9, 2010 at 11:08 am
thank you so much...
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