the fatal kiss/dream

March 21, 2010
By Tha1Chick BRONZE, Stuart, Florida
Tha1Chick BRONZE, Stuart, Florida
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You heffer! or HOLY HEFFA!


Two fourteen year oold teens in love
Staring breathlessley at eachother
both hearts beating slowly
Boy leans forward closing his dark colored eyes
Girl then leans in closing her eyes
quietness surrounds them in the dark sky
lips touch softly and smoothly
Girl and boy thinks the kiss is like fireworks in the sky
As the wonderful moment ends boy leaves girl staring into what used to be him
The girl now twenty years old and relizes the boy was just a fatal dream and there was no boy
Girl is left crying herself a river because her love is gone
boy died in a fire two years before
her first and last true love is gone forever
What shall she do now ?


The author's comments:
my friend and i came up with this while reading romeo and juliet.

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on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:51 pm
Tha1Chick BRONZE, Stuart, Florida
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well  this is tha1 chiks cuzin ashleyluv22 amd she thinks this is deep!    

on May. 15 2010 at 12:40 pm
mikaylaquinn GOLD, NewCastle, Pennsylvania
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~♥life is your own personal fairy tale, you gotta do what ever you need to do to make it come true!♥~

aww!! i love itt.. its really sad tho but also really good!!!

on May. 9 2010 at 11:08 am
Tha1Chick BRONZE, Stuart, Florida
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You heffer! or HOLY HEFFA!

thank you so much...

CrazyMK SILVER said...
on May. 1 2010 at 12:52 pm
CrazyMK SILVER, Lindale, Texas
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I love it! Very deep and sad...




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