Blackberry Kiss MAG

March 25, 2010
By ottersarah SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
ottersarah SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everywhere, man blames nature and fate, yet his fate is only the echo of his character and passions, his mistakes and his weaknesses


I have the urge
to run down in blue night
just to see what is left
from the story.

Some say the blackberries are
gone now,
but i need to touch and
remember every song left
between thorns
and bittersweet memories


The author's comments:
I originally wrote this to depict my feelings when summer was finally coming to an end

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on Nov. 17 2011 at 1:35 pm
HisPurePrincess ELITE, Flemington, New Jersey
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42 words and you create an entire picure complete with emotion, texture and sound.   Lovely.

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on Oct. 7 2010 at 6:44 pm
ebee123 SILVER, Rochester, Minnesota
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I love this poem. It's very short but conveys everything in those ten lines.

on Oct. 7 2010 at 4:38 pm
meganwagner21 PLATINUM, Old Bridge, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes good things have to fall apart so better things can fall together." -Marilyn Monroe
"Nobody can go back and make a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending." -Maria Robinson

relly relly relly gud<3

if uve ever read walk two moons by sharon creech, they use the term blackberry kiss as well. reminded me of tht


on Oct. 7 2010 at 7:52 am
ottersarah SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everywhere, man blames nature and fate, yet his fate is only the echo of his character and passions, his mistakes and his weaknesses

Thank you for your praise, it means the world to me :) 

on Oct. 7 2010 at 7:50 am
ottersarah SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everywhere, man blames nature and fate, yet his fate is only the echo of his character and passions, his mistakes and his weaknesses

Thank you! I must also agree, bittersweet is a favorite adjective of mine :)

on Oct. 7 2010 at 1:32 am
I_am_the_only_me GOLD, Bakersfield, California
15 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Risk more than others think is safe. Care more than others think is wise. Dream more than others think is practical. Expect more than others think is possible. " ~ Cadet Maxim
that's an awesome quote learn it, love it, live by it.

Amazing! I liked it. This peice really got to me for some reason. I just love the adjective 'bittersweet' also :) great work. Keep writting!

on Oct. 6 2010 at 8:59 pm
shybuthappy GOLD, Perris, California
12 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even if you are at the bottom, there is nowhere to go but up.

I love summer so much. This piece touched me.

on Sep. 29 2010 at 7:12 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I am amazed by this beautiful and very poetic piece. Every bit of it is my favorite and every word a treasure. This is a wonderful way to depict your feelings with brevity. Well done, my dear, well done.




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